Desk Crit: Suwha Lee

Hi Sue,

Here's a desk crit for you!

Splash page looks beautiful - unusual and effective navigation.

Intro - why is there audio on the first screen but not the screen with the instructional goals? It might be more consistent to continue with the audio on that screen.

Lesson 1:
At first, I wasn't sure what I was supposed to do on this screen. I know that they are numbered, but perhaps you could add the word Step? Step 1. View the situation.
Step 2. Review....
Step 3. Now that you have reviewed...

or, you could add directions at the top of the screen under CASE 1.

I really like the way the audio and animations match - it looks very professional.

I would say the same for each Case - make the directions clearer somehow.

I think overall, it looks very impressive, and it functions well. The audio sounds much better than when I saw your project at the dress rehearsal.

Thanks!
Carrie