Desk Crit: Jea Choi

Hi Jea,

I reviewed your project and wanted to give you some feedback!

I love the design - I immediately wanted to explore the site. I think it's inviting, and I really like the character on the intro page who is talking.

Throughout the module, be consistent in how you write "Think-aloud". Sometimes you capitalize the T, sometimes you don't.

The first intro page - here are some minor suggestions (the corrections are in all capital letters)
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Hi, my name is Jenny.
I am a student in AN Instructional Product Evaluation class!

I am trying to evaluate AN education program using think-aloud protocol.

However, I am not sure if I am doing IT CORRECTLY.
Please help me get through this!
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Next Page:

Move your mouse over the menu ITEM TO LEARN MORE.

Under Full Contents:

You will be able to see a full text of what you have learned in THE "lesson" section.


Under Links:
Internet resources related to think-aloud protocol will be LOCATED HERE.
Search through the Internet and LEARN TO BE MORE PROFESSIONAL in Think-aloud

one other small thing: at the bottom, it says Copy Right - Copyright should be one word, and the r would be lowercase.

I know you are still adding things to your project - I think it's going to be really great! I can't wait to see the finished product. Let me know if you have any questions about these comments!

Thanks,
Carrie